Thursday, February 7, 2008

Stranger Come Back...



Writing these words brings

life back to ma hands,

Calling you stranger,

it's me, you hear

I know its difficult,

but hey you dont fear,

You gonna come back

and write with someone near.

Pumping you up is your friend,

and hey you gonna write,

is wat i bet.

Recall the thoughts that you

buried deep in your soul,

you doing fine is wat

I tell.

Come back Oh! stranger,

waiting for you,


You gonna do it and i bet on you.

- Hitz

6 comments:

beamess said...

Splendid is an understatement....too cool...

neha said...

hey hitz...dis 1's so deeply thought....it bind blowing ....
waiting to read more from ur side..
bravo..hitz

Sushlee said...

AMAZING WORK BROTHER..
Just keep that thought train going,One fine day ull surly hear that lil heart ringing!!;)

beamess said...

hey hitz its simply superb!!!!!!
go on wid more such beautiful poems.......

divsi said...

first of all whose dis beamesss?[:)]lolzzz...
okie hitz i hv alredy told u dis is one helluva poem...HOW cud u not preserve yr poems.............grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..kip writin buddy....amazin flow of words...:):)

Anonymous said...

kickass dude!!!
i just hope d stranger comes :)