I was in a darkened room,
It was all black and white,
No colour and nothing bright,
One day you came into my sight,
Don't know how to explain that site,
I felt amazed and i felt life,
That was you- A Ray Of Light,
The twinkle in your eyes...
from a pair of glass, was shining bright....
I donno about you but I felt nice,
That Ray changed my life,
I was back to brightness....
and full of life....
You were so far but yet so close...
I don't know how to describe...
The ray so powerful and bright....
That i almost lost my sight,
The only image running through my eyes...
is your's and nothing else,
I don't know if it were reel...
or real...
But it changed my life.
Love You and your Ray of light.
-Hitz
7 comments:
hey after reading this ray of light,
i must say ur creatively bright,
beautiful poems u write,
ur emotions r so white,
i hope she'll understand ur feels right,
and for ever she'll be in ur sight...
okies...so she wears glasses;)
hehe..damn ..shes so lucky..all of my dear frn's poems r dedicated to dis one gal!!!!:)
u kno wat---if u havnt told her yet---read d poem below dis;);)cheers....
n nehaaaaaa wats gotten into you;)hehe...way to go gurlie...
hey hitz...... u r unstoppable........just go on yaar.... gr8 work......so beautifully written....... hats off!!!!!
am fckn tired of commenting on ur splendid peoms...
spare me plzzzzzzzzz
dis was one of d most beautifull thought iv cum across..itz reli awesome..jstt lurrvvvee ur thoughts..g8 goin ha..;)
hey hitz ur thoughts r realy awsome....i dint noe dat write such good poems yaar...claps 4 u!!!!!!!!!!!!
BROTHER REALLY UR POEM IS AWESOME NO WORDS FOR UR GR8 POEM ITS SIMPLY GOOD
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