
Laying in the Graveyard,
I look at Life,
I am dead, I am alive,
Dead is my soul and, My body has life....
There is no peace here too,
coz you and your thoughts,
Are on my mind....
Rest in peace is what,
the world tells me.....
Sadness is the permanent scar of my life,
But happiness may grip you nice and tight,
Carrying the weight of this,
Dead soul is too much for me...
God! Take me I wanna be free!
Oh! Angel of Death .... I call you,
Take me with you,
coz I know..... I will never get,
the love of ma life..
This is wat i plead.....
Plz call me............
-Hitz
I look at Life,
I am dead, I am alive,
Dead is my soul and, My body has life....
There is no peace here too,
coz you and your thoughts,
Are on my mind....
Rest in peace is what,
the world tells me.....
Sadness is the permanent scar of my life,
But happiness may grip you nice and tight,
Carrying the weight of this,
Dead soul is too much for me...
God! Take me I wanna be free!
Oh! Angel of Death .... I call you,
Take me with you,
coz I know..... I will never get,
the love of ma life..
This is wat i plead.....
Plz call me............
-Hitz
10 comments:
hitesh...hum toh thak jaane wale hain apke poems ko praise kate karte....superb yaar....!!!!
hey hitz u to becoming a gr8 poet day by day yaar...... kya kahoon dis one is fatte, gr8......continue writing.......
dude...ill kill you man..!!!!!!!!
awsum material reyy
i totally agree with zainab...
hum thakne wale hai tere tarif kar ke...
fatte likh ta hai re tu...u think so much!!
hitzzzzz........u meet me on monday...i m gonnna kill u honestly....for hiding dis talent first..n then not preserving such masterpieces....r u nutz??/man u hav awesum creativity!!!!!!m speechless....p.s: saare purane wale doondh!!!
kuttee kaminee..
i m telling u seriously....chuck studying..start writing...
ul really leave a big impression on the world
hey bro just keep rocking.....sash
hi bro
2222222 gud yaar
keep it up
hmmm killeer u rock dude
u know sumthin when we read ur poem naah it directly comes as an imagination and dats very hard 2 do man i mean we can feel it
u rck!!!!!! \m/
Dude it's really awesome sorry to comment late but really i have no words!!!!thnks for being my frnd...appreciated!!!
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